Update On My Memoir

It’s been fairly busy for me, between work and play. I received the edits on my memoir last Friday! I’ve been ecstatic to get them back from the editor because there’s so much good stuff he included. He put together a 6-page “author instructions” for how to read the edits in the manuscript and what steps to take first before moving forward.

In it he included the strengths to my book, and what my weaknesses are. I’m seeing my book clearer than ever, even after years of being in critique groups. He was able to take a full read of the story and mark up what was needing improvement, what didn’t make sense, and WHY.

Lessons I’m learning:

#1. Narrate.  I wish I was told this from the beginning of memoir writing…and so I’ve worn out my “showing.” I need to tell! Telling the story sews together the example scenes and guides my reader along, so it’s not just immersing the reader into the experiences without any explanation.

#2. Cut what doesn’t apply to the theme or purpose of the book. There are so many stories that repeat the same results (in principle) that I will have to select the most important of each subject/principle and cut the rest out. Bye-bye repetitive scenes. I can’t have every bipolar experience in it.

#3. Determine the purpose of the book. This guides what stays, and what is cut. At this point I want to keep what fits my purpose of showing/educating the reader on what it’s like to have bipolar disorder as a Christian. And, the importance of medication (sub-purpose).

#4. Have fun. This is my second draft, but I’m enjoying the journey. It’s like a weight has been lifted since I’m now clearer in the aforementioned points. I’m having a great time narrating and telling, developing my writer voice. To the finish line!

I spent a good amount on the edits, which I don’t regret, but I’m learning. Using the freelancer referral site for authors, Reedsy.com, I was able to vet about 4 editors before deciding on Sam (O’Neal), and I’m really glad I chose him. I highly recommend the site and his services, in particular, for a memoir.

Now, it’s time to get back to editing. After all, it’s been long enough…what, 8 years in the making? I am excited and looking forward to producing the next draft, getting me one more step closer to publishing my “baby.”

Be bold, stay brave!